I'm sorry but this animation is very poorly constructed
Pros
-Some nice animation such as the blur effect
-A very good animation if you were new to flash
-Almost like Egoraptor's "Awesome Series" style of art
Cons
-Poor voice quality
-Poor voice acting
-Had barely anything to do with the Metroid video game, remember Egoraptor makes his animations based off certain details in the game, such as annoyances, bosses, etc. etc.
I hope this helped you... You really need a better microphone by the way :D or just stop talking to close to it.
i fixed the mic issue, and yes, i did this one in a rush, but i am pleased with its popularity :D
the second one has fixed many of these issues, except the voice acting (me :P) because i want her crappy VA to be sort of a identity, away from other samus's :)
the next one harneses many of the qualities missing in this one (such as a script :P) and many of the missing jokes.
it is also going to be twice as long :)
oh, and what diddnt this have to do with the game? in the origional, you could die from a ball touching you (or.... it would at least take health away)
and it wasnt well thought out.
im still in disagreement with "very bad" because its my most popular and favored flash amongst the public. and i do sympathise that it shouldnt have been as popular as it was, but i still wanted to be a little noticed on the grounds :P
god, i hope your reading all this...
ok... i wasnt new to flash, i was merely testing out my abilities to make an awesome movie, and in this one, they werent very good... but it did score the 4th highest awesome until awesomefield :)
im glad that you used constructive critiscism, so ill leave you with this...
live long to help those in need, not those who know what help they need, leave that for them to figure that out themselves.
basicially.... IM NOT A NOOB! I DO ALOT OF FLASHWORK, AND YOUR A GOOD 130 REVIEWS LATE TO TELL ME WHAT I DID WRONG!!! lol
i know exactly what to do in 2, so dont worry! just dont say the same thing ive heard too much already :)